Thursday 9 August 2018

Sick Sentence

Sick Sentence




A boy walks on a road.
He sees a figure.
He feels happy.



It is the middle of the night in Afghanistan and the streets are lit up with moonlight as Harry looks out onto the road.

A 12 year old boy named Jeff walks down the street guided by the moonlight as if he has nowhere to go but he is following the scent of fresh breed.

Then Jeff walks on to the road and into Harry’s sites, when Harry sees him he gets scared, then he notices that it is his friend Jeff who had got sent to a concentration camp.

When he notices that it is just Jeff happyness surges through him as he realises that he survived the concentration camp.

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