Monday, 26 March 2018

Tupai Description

In Class for writing we have been learning to describe someone or something and build a picture in someones mind. We are reading a book called the real thing and we had to pick a character and describe him.
Here is my description on Tupai.



We also had to draw a picture of Tupai or Fizzer.
Here is mine.

Next Time I need to varies my sentence starters.

1 comment:

  1. Great job Ben, you have described Tupai well. I agree with you that next time you can vary your sentences.

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